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作者: deepblue75    時間: 2010-9-3 04:21 AM     標題: James Blunt - you're beautiful 自彈自唱

[wma]http://f10.wretch.yimg.com/j0102692000/1/1799076965.mp3[/wma]

My life is brilliant.
My love is pure.
I saw an angel.
Of that I'm sure.
She smiled at me on the subway.
She was with another man.
But I won't lose no sleep on that,
'Cause I've got a plan.

You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause I'll never be with you.

Yeah, she caught my eye,
As we walked on by.
She could see from my face that I was,
Fucking high,(Real version)
Flying high,(clean version)
And I don't think that I'll see her again,
But we shared a moment that will last till the end.

You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause I'll never be with you.
You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
There must be an angel with a smile on her face,
When she thought up that I should be with you. (這句太難了...一直唱不好)
But it's time to face the truth,
I will never be with you.

作者: yoyo90434    時間: 2010-9-3 06:57 PM

恩 就像你說的 那句你的確唱不好
接下來是You're beautiful的beau 似乎有點那麼緊
I saw your face in a crowded place這句 和
There must be an angel with a smile on her face 妳唱得有點ㄍㄧㄥ
而crowded place 的crow 那裏 恩.. 要修飾一下
其他沒甚麼要改了
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause I'll never be with you. 這裡你唱的不錯  蠻喜歡這裡的
假音也用得蠻不錯的

整體來說 你唱的不差 感覺很不賴  只是缺少了那麼一些情感
能這樣彈唱 很不賴  我還差你多的呢 下個作品  繼續加油!!   ^^b
作者: deepblue75    時間: 2010-9-4 03:10 AM

本帖最後由 deepblue75 於 2010-9-4 03:15 AM 編輯

回復 2# yoyo90434


謝謝你這麼認真的去聽..
老實說錄這首的時候歌還沒練得很熟...
加上之前住的地方隔音不好...所以沒重錄到好...怕隔壁會抗議


感謝您的指教...下次會注意發音(咬字)和放感情進去

I saw your face in a crowded place這句 和
There must be an angel with a smile on her face

原唱本來是把高音的部份用假音唱(有點半假音)...
我本來想用真音去詮釋...似乎是太ㄍ一ㄥ了一點==
作者: a22533884    時間: 2010-9-18 03:56 PM

不錯聽呢 推自彈自唱一個
期待新的作品喔:)
作者: lsortnj    時間: 2010-9-25 10:06 PM

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