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今天練習了寫作的最後一題，想請問最後一題都必須要寫到300字嗎?以下是題目和小弟的文章，煩請各方高手指點，謝謝！ Some people have arguments or disagreements with each others at work. What's the best way to handle conflict in the workplace. Support your opinion with specific reasons and examples.
People always have arguments or disagreement in any kind of groups. Because everyone have different opinions.
Therefore it is very important for everyone to learn how to handle conflict. However, as far as I am concerned, I would rather prevent a fight instead of dealing with it. So, what should we do?
I believe the only reason that cause an argument is Misunderstanding. Which is why a good communication skill is always the best way to avoid an argument. First of all, when we have a talk with someone, we need to show our respect. For instance, we can't interrupt them just beacuse we are disagree with them. Also, when it's your turn to speak, always be careful with the words you use. Don't make others feel offensive. Respect is the best way to deal with people.
But there is some possiblity that we can't avoid a conflict. Because people will not always do what you want them to do. When we are in a fight with somebody. The first thing I suggest you to do is still that show your respect. If someone being rude to you, that doesn't mean you can do the same thing to them.
It means "I don't want a argument" when we treat them respectfully.
To sum up, all we need to learn is how to respect others, how to communicate with others. Not only because of avoiding conflict, we can also maintain a good relationship with everyone.
作者: pop00123 時間: 2015-12-3 05:52 PM
本帖最後由 pop00123 於 2015-12-3 06:03 PM 編輯
紫色部分是不恰當的用字
紅色部分是錯誤的文法或用字
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People often have arguments or disagreements in all kinds of groups because everyone has different opinions.
(用always代表「必定、絕對會」，太過果斷且與事實不符)
(any：「任一」, every：「每一」, all：「各種.」...等的用法要分清楚)
(英文寫作時要避免用 Because 開句)
(everyone 是單數，所以要用 has. 再基本不過的文法規則，但還是很多英文"不錯"的人在犯)
Therefore, it is very important for everyone to learn how to handle conflict. However, as far as I am concerned, I would rather prevent a fight thandeal with it after. So, what should we do?
(rather通常要對應 than)
(prevent 是原型，那 deal 怎麼變 ing?)
(句後要加 after 才完整)
I believe the only thing that causes an argument is misunderstanding,which is why having (no 'a') good communication skills is always the best way to avoid an argument. First of all, when we (no 'have a') talk with someone, we need to show our respect. For instance, we can't interrupt people just because we (no 'are') disagree with them. Also, when it's your turn to speak, always be careful with the words you use. Don't make others feel offended. Being respectful is the best way to prevent an argument.
(reason這字通常不接cause，因為reason不會動)
(與 because 的理由一樣， 不要用 Which 開敘述句)
(offensive是「具有攻擊性」，offended 才是「受到侵犯」)
(末句的Respect是動詞，不能接 is. 要是 Being respectful 「要能尊重」)
(動詞要變動名詞的型態才能接 is)
However, there will be times that conflict cannot be avoided because people will not always do what you want them to do. When we find ourselves in an argument with somebody, the first thing I would suggest (no 'you' ) to do is to remain respectful. If someone is being rude to you, that doesn't mean you can do the same thing back.
It means "I don't want to argue" when we treat them respectfully.
To sum it all up, all we need to learn is how to respect others(no comma) and how to communicate with others. Not only for avoiding conflict, but (no 'we can') to also maintain (no 'a') good relationships with people.
